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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work?

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Indeed, its a well known fact that shades influence the feeling of individuals who look at them
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 both consciously as well as subconsciously
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, the colour schemes should be taken into consideration while decorating sites
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 as hospitals and offices.
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 been scientifically proven that that looking at certain combinations of
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colour
 help body to heal quickly and feel more refreshed for longer
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whereas watching
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a dull combination
the dull combination
 of these can have completely opposite effects.
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 the colours of a particular place should be painted according to the tasks carried out in there.
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 in a
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hospital
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 patients that look at the white colour often tend to recover more quickly and feel calm.Whereas
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 those workers in
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 office who have refreshing colours in front of them like orange
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red, white tend to work more energetically and have more stamina.It has
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 been observed that dull colours like
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brown, often
 make people feel nervous and sad and the same is the case with
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moreover
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 not just the shade of colour, but
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 the
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 that matters when it comes to influencing the mood of individuals
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 is observed that having plenty of light elevates the positive effects of the colours.
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, not having enough lighting could cause even a fantastic shade to look uninteresting.
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brightness
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 is good
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 too much
brightness
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 could damage the eyes of an individual and can generate the feeling of uneasiness.
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 conclude, psychologists are correct about the fact that colours affect our feelings, and different areas of work should have a matching set of colours on around their sites
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 with sufficient
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