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Some hold the view that ideas and informations should be completely open, and there should be no controls on what people can read and watch in the media

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These days, The media
such
 as TV or internet become one of the most convenient way of delivering info in the modern world. Every time you turn on the TV or flick through the sites you allowed to take data. Many people argue that materials should be absolutely accessible.
However
, believe that governments should restrict access to any secret material. I agree strongly with
this
 viewpoint. In
this
 essay, I will consider my own opinion with examples.
Firstly
, In many cases, some reports shared publicly from the mass media is prohibited by the governments because they contain unreliable details. I believe that the aim of some news programs has been just to gain attention without giving accurate data.
For instance
, in some countries due to false material is given by a news anchor, the majority of people have trouble.
However
, I feel that info must be provided freely for a range of reasons. People have the right to be informed in a transparent way. If some shows contain strong themes, language and violence that are unsuitable for young people, the programs should provide parental guidance logos. 
Secondly
, these days, religion has become the technique of persuading people to take part in wars using the net. Because of
this
, some people may listen to these callings from people who treat wrong religion concepts. In conclusion, I feel politicians should be able to intervene in special cases
such
 as national security reasons.
Also they
Accept comma addition
Also, they
 should warn people beware of unsuitable programs. On other words, it is people’s choice to watch or ignore
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