why is the engineering has become one of the demanding professions?

Looking back to the historical patterns of
development
of
world
’s highly developed countries, it did not happen over the time and no miracle happened, only humankind created
this
advancement.
In other words
, the
development
of today's highly developed countries is based on "Human
Development
", in which the government implements policies aimed at the folks; the people contributed their knowledge and skills they had gained in the
development
of the
country
, and as a consequence with the help of the government and the citizens’ collective strength, they achieved the peak of
development
. Many countries prove that “Human
Development
” is the main pillar of the
one
country
’s
development
policy; producing educated, responsible and patriotic citizens are the key element of the
country
’s
development
.
For instance
,
such
countries South Korea and Singapore, once being
one
of the least developed countries with poor natural resources, have now become as
one
of the most influential countries and the
history
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historical
witnesses that the key to the
development
is educated and patriotic citizens. Mongolia is rich in natural resources; but
however
, all these resources will be depleted at some point. The only inexhaustible and renewable wealth in
this
world
is human himself.
Therefore
, I think that the future
development
of Mongolia should be based on “Human
Development
” and not on natural resources. As I am a representative of thousand youths, who are the “Bright Future” of our
country
, I hold very dear to my homeland, and studying at
one
of the best universities in the
world
, becoming educated, responsible and patriotic citizen so that I can contribute to my
country
’s
development
and leave better society for the descendants of the
next
generation is very important for me, as my
country
’s independence was bought with the blood, sweats and tears of our fore-parents. It is commonly said that aspiration and goals are the pillars that support humankind to carry on, and an axis to revolve around the
world
. So where does that dream come from? Just questioning about its origin, I took an example on myself and landed on
this
pattern: Since childhood, I was driven by my consistent interest in how things work, crafting things with supplies on hand. Me and my dad together we made the best duo to fix broken things around the house and sometimes if I did not know how to fix something I would research it online. As the time has passed, I had already become the “engineer” of my family.
As a result
the curiosity led me to have an aptitude for the
physics
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physical
.
Furthermore
, I became more and more involved in science, especially in mathematics and physics, and I had participated in many competitions hosted in the Russian Federation. Fulfilling my school’s physics Olympiad team I have learned how the
world
of science is so appreciable that there is so much to learn.
Also
science is more important than anything else as it keeps pace with the ever-expanding
development
and the times. So I chose the profession of "Engineer" to guide me in my dreams. A wise man once said, “
Development
reaches at its peak only with a help of engineering intelligence”. It is
also
said that “God created humankind and the rest is made by the engineers”.
Hence
, "Engineering" is
one
of the most important professions for the prosperity of our
country
and other countries. It is, perhaps, reasonable that engineering is
one
of the priority professions in Mongolia. After a lot of research and reflection on where and which educational institution to pursue in my chosen field, I landed on choosing the University of Toronto, Canada, ranked 18th in the
world
and 1st in Canada, and I was admitted to the university. By being admitted to the University of Toronto, I was able to become
one
of the few eligible students obtaining an internship permit from
one
of the
world
's largest companies, which provides to small number of high-scoring students. I chose
this
university for the following reasons: The University of Toronto, Canada, is
one
of the
world
's leading universities in terms of training highly qualified professionals, doing
the most research
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more research
, which all are effective, engaging students in research and training them in a variety of skills.
In addition
, the school has the advantage of providing students with a wide range of skills, including not only theoretical knowledge but
also
practical experience, teamwork, innovation and calculation. Studying at
this
university I will be given a chance to keep pace with modern developments, fulfilling my dream of becoming a
world
-class “Mongolian expert” and doing more in my
country
that would lead all of us
to
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into
the bright future. In just four years, which is more valuable than anything, we will have taken a step closer to our long-term goal of resonating with the Mongolian potential in the
world
that is
evolving by the minute and
second
. My dream and goals might seem impossible or even unattainable, but I believe that we should think bigger, set bigger goals and strive for greater success. In retrospect, I am well aware that the
development
of any
country
is not created by time, but by the people who lead the
country
, and especially that the
development
of Mongolia depends on me and all of our efforts.
Thus
, I do not want to be someone who follows the flow of life and is chased by the wind. I strive to be someone who relentless pursuit of my dreams, raising the flag of “Goal”, and chase after my dreams, regardless of the storm.
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