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what are the advantages and disadvantages of studying online courses?

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Online studying is an attractive source of study nowadays. It is good for long distances and short period of time, but on the other side, it
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 has some negative impacts on students. Lets discuss in the essay. Web-based learning is commonly referred to as eLearning or online learning. It essentially includes learning online through the courses that are offered on the net. Emails, live lectures, and video conferencing are all possible through the net.
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 enables all the participants to give their views on a particular topic and
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 offer static pages like
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 materials that are printed for the benefit of all the participants. One of the main advantages of accessing pages on the web is that most of the web pages have hyperlinks that will lead you to another page and
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 opens up a vast amount of information on the net. You don't have the time to actually go to a University and attend classes. Earlier it would have been a major problem, as you wouldn't know how to manage that, but not anymore. With the several courses available online, you can actually sit at home and learn. Know more about waking up early and attending classes or that irritating classmate. Now take whichever
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 at peace and at your convenience. A web-based
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 would typically include
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 information, timetable, notice board, curriculum map, teaching materials like articles, slides, and handouts, communication through discussion boards and email, summative and formative assessments, student management tools like statistics, records, and student tracking, and
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 links to external and internal websites that are very useful. But
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 practice? Let us have a look at the advantages and disadvantages of eLearning
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