You have some time off work and are hoping to visit a close friend, Stephanie, for a few days. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest spending time together • explain why you have time to do this • propose some activities

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Dear Stephanie, How are you doing? Long

time

no see. I was wondering whether we can spend some

time

together. I would be free

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this

weekend as my husband is on a business tour and I am not working from home. So, it would be good if you come to my house for a couple of days. It’s been

long

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that we have spent some

time

with each other. We can play a game or two of badminton in the morning.

Then

we can spend some

time

cooking our favourite dishes. I remember the mousse cake you made on my

last

birthday. It was totally awesome. We can

also

try our hands in some other forms of cuisines. After that, we can settle down together for

binge watching

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on our favourite sitcom, FRIENDS. Later in the evening, we can go to the nearby mall for shopping. There is a nice restaurant opened in our locality recently. I think we must visit the place. In short, we would be having a nostalgic

time

together. I hope you like my suggestion and do come down to my house to spend

time

with me. Please let me know on my mobile phone so that I can arrange

likewise

. With warm wishes, Samarpita

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