Topic: a great city should not be confounded with a populous one. Discuss the above statement and give your own opinion
(There is no doubt that) A
city
(can be) is generally defined as a permanent and densely settled place with extensive systems. Use synonyms
However
, (“a great Linking Words
city
should not be confounded with a populous one”.) (Paraphrase the given topic, please.) Use synonyms
This
piece of writing is going to cast light on the above statement.
In the Linking Words
first
place, a densely populated Linking Words
city
may not be regarded as a great one. As a matter of fact, a populous Use synonyms
city
possibly engender(s) numerous disadvantages. If the population is rapidly growing, there will not be sufficient accommodation to meet the demand. It Use synonyms
also
poses a negative impact on water supplies, fuel and other resources. Linking Words
In addition
, crowded cities are confronted with environmental Linking Words
problems namely
pollution and global warming as well. Accept comma addition
problems, namely
For instance
, a large number of households directly dump sewage into the riversLinking Words
,
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,
hence
, they take a toll on the quality of water. Linking Words
Furthermore
, Linking Words
city
-dwellers are beset with social issues, in which class (distinction) discrepancy is the most typical. Use synonyms
(
Elucidate Accept space
(
this
point with more details.)
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Second
of all, a great Linking Words
city
can be distinguished from others by these following factors. Use synonyms
(
To illustrate) Specifically, a sizeable Accept space
(
city
provides its inhabitants with abundant space for Use synonyms
accomodation
, transportation, working as well as entertainment. By providing a sense of satisfaction, it can improve people’s living standards more than any other kind of settlement. making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
accommodations
Moveover
, a great Suggestion
Move over
city
(is attributed to) is Use synonyms
also
judged on the criteria of (the development of Linking Words
economy
) Suggestion
the economy
socio-economic
development, cultural diversity, education, healthcare and security system as well. involving social as well as economic factors
socioeconomic
Therefore
, it can be an appropriate and ideal place for high-flyers to live and work. Linking Words
(
Why). As a consequence, those people can take advantage of chances to startup and (Accept space
(
flourishly
) succeed/ flourish.
In conclusion, a great Suggestion
city
can be populous, but a densely populated Use synonyms
city
may not be considered as an (admirable) a Use synonyms
favorable
one. From my personal perspective, a encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
city
with equality is the most worthyUse synonyms
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