Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world, people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantage?

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Increasing globalization has blurred the line between nations in terms of the clothes they wear, the TV channels they watch, or their dining habits. I think its advantages outweigh the disadvantages. On the one hand, when the differences in the most basic ways of doing things less obvious the

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has become more connected and integrated. Platforms

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as Netflix are doing a great job in communicating cultural differences of Western movies towards the Eastern

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and vice versa. People,

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, gain insights as to why foreigners act in a certain way, which is a contrast to the norms in their countries or their belief systems.

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, they become more considerate and tolerable towards visitors.

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, globalization and its effects could add more spices and variety to people’s life. Fashion styles are no longer restricted within a country’s boundary, but reach

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and embrace waves of fresh, and original from international tastes, which is what fashion would be, and designers and fashion enthusiasts crave.

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, an influx of foreign culture products could mean the erosion of the host country’s traditions and cultures. Take American influences as an example, which are feared as a new form of cultural imperialism.

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, comfortable and affordable items like jeans are marginalizing traditional costumes in some parts of the

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, imported films have the largest market share, driving people’s attention towards foreign cultures rather than indigenous traditions and values. As a consequence, more people are more knowledgeable about foreign ways of life than they are about their own cultures. In conclusion, despite the cultural values of a country that might be deleterious impacted by an increasingly integrated

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, it seems to me that the merits are more significant than the drawbacks.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Cultural globalization
Cultural exchange
Cross-cultural communication
Assimilation
Homogenization
Acculturation
Traditional customs
Local economies
Diversity
Inclusion

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Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world, people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantage?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas.

The Vital Role of Banking in Promoting Economic Growth and Development.

Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both these views!