The number of people working online from home has grown in some countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
While online working is being increasingly popular, it is becoming controversial since some people feel that its merits are hard to quantify exactly. There are valid opinions on both sides, which I will discuss now now.As today's world is becoming increasingly more developed,
distance
working appears highly popular in some countries because workers consider that they feel more convenient and they can recharge quickly by spending their breaks with their family members. Furthermore
, working online considers the superior way of cutting the rate of spread of COVID-19. Finally
, it is fairly clear that working from home is profoundly effective for not only the health of today's Earth population, but also
for the workers' spirit.
Notwithstanding, many people, opposed to, online works, support to the views that this
created myriads of problems for some people who started distance
working suddenly because of illnesses. It means that not all countries were ready for this
. Moreover
, the Internet is not excellent some part of the world and this
is one more reason why distance
working is thought challenging. Lastly
, it can be witnessed in some areas that starting to work online at once shocked people.To draw a conclusion, I personally feel that distance
working can provide workers with numerous advantages rather than possible disadvantages.Submitted by johnnycage00771 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
