The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? You should write at least 250 words. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

Although

many people opine that the amount of time spent on planning for the

future

is not as a radical idea as concentrating on the present,

however I

Accept comma addition

however, I

agree, to some extent, with

this

idea so there is equal importance of

future

and current life. In

this

essay, I will explain both of the notions with relevant reasons. On the one hand, individuals must have plans to achieve and

also

these actions can prevent them from failures that may occur. There is to say, that when people have attained their goals that makes them motivated, they start to take into account the fact that getting good results is due to specific strategies.

For instance

, if a person who wants to run a business has a solid plan, he can accomplish his goals smoothly and without difficulty.

In other words

, setting up plans for the

future

is key point to avoid the risks people face.

For example

, if a student does not consider what kind of skills or certificates requires him when selecting a career, he may face many problems when finding a job.

On the other hand

, it is believed that people should take

actions

Suggestion

action

now

instead

of postponing.

In other words

, if people do not attempt to change their objectives into reality, these plans will be a waste of time. To illustrate, if a company thinks to produce a new product and delays its project for

future

Suggestion

the future

, another company may

firstly

begin to manufacture the same product before it.

Hence

, we must not rely on the plans that may lead to failures. In conclusion, I reiterate that both planning for the

future

and paying attention to the current life are effective ways to enable people to achieve a success and reduce the upcoming risks.