Many people think happiness relies upon the responsibility of individuals, others think that is affected by other factors. Discuss both views and state your opinion
People have different views on factors which
effect
the happiness. In my opinion, an individual can stay happy irrespective of the obstacles in the conscious subjective aspect of feeling or emotion
affect
life
.
In the contemporary era, it is very difficult to achieve self content in life
. This
means that the person’s emotions is not attached to any materialistic things life
fortune, wealth etc. Moreover
, they may be able to conquer the obstacles in their journey of life
. Such
people live an ascetic life
and has a very minimalistic approach towards living. Hence
, their emotions are not effected
and they have a complete control on it. acted upon; influenced
affected
For example
, in India there are group
of Monks who have donated their wealths but they still enjoy their Suggestion
a group
life
peacefully.
On the other hand
, one evident factor, which people believe effects prosperity is to possess a lot of wealth. This
is because there is a belief that money can buy happiness. To elaborate, the basic standard of living is not possible to achieve without the money. Secondly
, most people attach their prosperity with the achievements in life
. For instance
, a student may find prosperity in achieving first rank
in school. All the material factor Suggestion
the first rank
have
a negative impact on an individual because his happiness is tied to a condition where if it is not fulfilled he may get into depression. According to a recent study, people whose emotions are Suggestion
has
effected
by outside factors tend to be anxious in nature.
In conclusion, acted upon; influenced
affected
although
a goal in life
is important as it motivates an individual to perform well but
the emotions should be in control of an individual.Accept comma addition
well, but
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