Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine . However at best , these methods are ineffective and at worst ,they may be dangerous .To what extend you agree.

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In the advance society

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a lot of people that

depends

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depend

on alternative systems of

medicine

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for the cure of many

illiness

impairment of normal physiological function affecting part or all of an organism

illnesses

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these types of medicines can be detrimental to one's health

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While

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I do not agree with

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view so alternative

medicine

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is beneficial for human

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it can cure a lot of disease.

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with, there are numerous types of alternative medicines

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as, Ayurvedic,

homeopathy

a method of treating disease with small amounts of remedies that, in large amounts in healthy people, produce symptoms similar to those being treated

homoeopathy

Homeopathy

and naturopathy are increasingly popular for human diseases.

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sometime

on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always

sometimes

people are very reluctant to take allopathic medicines

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As of the harmful side effects on human bodies.

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, Ayurvedic and

homeopathy

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Homeopathy

homoeopathy

homeopathic

medicines are made of natural substances

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, it

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has

fewer side effects.

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The traditional forms of medicines are less

invesive

relating to a technique in which the body is entered by puncture or incision

invasive

and cheaper

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of the modern

medicine

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Government should expend more money for medical care in hospitals.

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this

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, many types of diseases can be cured effectively with traditional medicines

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, Ayurvedic massage is the best treatment for cervical and

spressed

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spinal cord

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some

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Some

traditional

enthusiasties

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have effective treatment for diseases

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cancer

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diabetes and hypertension

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It is a separate Field of

medicine

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than modern medicines

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Most of traditional doctors discover a new

medicines

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medicine

from nature. To conclude

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I concern that the ancient systems of

medicine

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can cure many

disease

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diseases

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It is not pernicious for health

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They are beneficial for human as they have no side effects and less

invesive

relating to a technique in which the body is entered by puncture or incision

invasive

and cheaper than allopathic

medicine

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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine . However at best , these methods are ineffective and at worst ,they may be dangerous .To what extend you agree.

Your opinion

In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

*Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the past, people used to travel abroad to look for many difference from their home country. Nowadays, cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar. What are the reasond? do the adventages outweight disadventages?

in some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building their living. what are the reasons for this? how can people research this?

Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.