In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, pupils are acquiring a knowledge in the single-sex schools which were selected by their parents, and it is claimed that it will have drawbacks in their future life. I partially agree with
this
notion. In the following paragraphs I shall put forth my argument to support my point of view.
Firstly
, due to less communication with the opposite gender anyone will sense a discomfort and
also
one’s professional life affected badly.
In other words
, pupils, who went to only single-gender schools grew up shy and weak.
For instance
, personality who wants to get a job should pass a conversation in which checks ability to capable of performing under cruel circumstances.
Hence
, if
this
is a graduate of the single-sex school, the individual does not have a challenging work. Whereas people who have attended mixed-gender institute have proven to perform excellently under any critical situation.
On the other hand
, co-educational institutions have a badly discipline issue, which interfere of their studies with allowing various contradictions.
However
, separated gender schools can avoid from these problems and
as a result
, everyone would completely focus on their lessons. To put it simply, it is proved that almost all of the graduates who gain an education in single-sex high schools have more ability to concentrate comparing with conventional institutes.
Therefore
,
this
type of schools does not waste special time and improves attention skills. To sum up, I believe that young generations who were not attending co-ed schools are not able to successfully and develop professionally.
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