You are looking for a part-time job at a golf club. Write a letter to the manager of the golf club. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have tell him/her when you could start
Dear Manager
My name is Sarath. I’m a
21 year old
student. Currently persuading business management course in the Jawahar university. It is my Add a hyphen
21-year-old
third
year. I am writing this
letter to ask if there are any part-time job vacancies at your golf
club.
I really enjoy sports and used to participate in sports championships from the
school life. Correct article usage
apply
Golf
is one of my favourite events. I have some experience of coaching in this
, while have been at the school. My father is also
a golf
player. Last
year, I worked in the holidays at his golf
club as a part-time job. I can provide you referrals from that club,
if you really need Remove the comma
apply
it
.
My exams will be over by Correct pronoun usage
them
this
month end
and Add a hyphen
month-end
thus
, I can start working from the beginning of the next
month. Furthermore
, my next
semester will begin after 2 months. Thereafter
, as I have classes during daytime
, I prefer to work in the evenings and on the weekends.
I look forward to Add an article
the daytime
hear
a positive reply from Change the verb form
hearing
in
the near.
Your’s faithfully,
Sarath DivakarCorrect pronoun usage
you in
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite