Some people think international car-free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution; however, others think there are other ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Dear James, From past few days I had lots of work in the office and I feel very stretched at the end of the day. Because of the workload I am exhausted at the end of the day. Because nowadays the company that I am working with had a merger with another company,
consequently
the workload has been increased a lot and I have to spend a great deal of time with the company. So I am writing
this
to inform you that I will not be able to continue with the course at
this
time, because of the aforesaid reason that I mentioned, because it is now becoming very difficult for me to continue both things simultaneously. I basically want to have a break with the course and will wait for the things to settle down in my office premises and
then
only I would be coming back to complete the remaining course preferably else I will restart it from beginning. Best Regards Jaspreet Singh.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • emissions standards
  • renewable energy
  • environmentally friendly
  • public transportation
  • pedestrian zones
  • commuter behavior
  • awareness
  • incentives
  • air pollution
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