Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer?

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Nowadays youngsters select listening to
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instead
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of listening to the news on the radio.
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essay will
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consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
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the good points of listening to
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and good points of interest in the news. 34 On the one hand, nowadays the majority of young people interested in
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. For many youths,
music
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is a necessary part of their life.
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Firstly
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Firstly, music
music
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has a great effect on a teenager's mood.
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, many famous bloggers recommend listening to
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when you are in a bad mood.
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,
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can give us inspiration.
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, famous psychology said that
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in the morning can give a lot of inspiration all day. 76
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, listening to the news should be important for teenagers, as they must be involved in the modern problems.
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, listening to
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can help to get some information for education.
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, listening to the news can develop our mind, it is good for self-education.
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, the majority of people who involved in politics very clever. 57 In conclusion, I will tell you my personal opinion.
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is a big part of my life, it helps me in different moments, but
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it is important to be involved in modern problems.34 Alexa
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