what are the advantages and disadvantegs of leaving your country to live or study abroad?

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Nowadays, many people prefer to study or live in foreign countries. While studying and living abroad brings merit to people, it

also

has a number of drawbacks. I personally believe

this

tendency has both positive and negative sides, which will be discussed below. To start with, there are some considerable advantages in leaving own

country

Firstly

, individuals who are working in a foreign

country

are able to get excellent pay packages and save for their future years. More to the point, young can build up a very strong financial source. It helps to settle in the foreign

country

without any difficulties

Accept space

Another positive side is that living abroad makes people much more independent than depending on family members or relatives.Being independence gives more chances to be successful person in the future life.

In addition

to these there are some advantages which many people cannot refuse,

such

as learning a new language easily, high quality of education and

also

broaden horizons.

However

, there are several obvious negative sides too. If people leave their own

country

and move to another state they can come across culture shock. It means people cannot able to enjoy the traditional holidays at homeland and

also

it may be so difficult for people to adopt today in new surroundings

cause side is that feeling loneliness and no stability.

Moreover

, a lot of people have already returned, because they so miss their friends and relatives. In conclusion reviews living abroad seem attractive and I believe that we shouldn't dismiss the value of our

country

and relatives

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