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The line graph illustrates the temperatures in Paris, Boston and Melbourne every month. At
first
glance it clear that
weather
Suggestion
the weather
in Parise and Boston is warmer than in Melbourne during the summer time.
However
, the temperatures in former two cities
is
Suggestion
are
lower than in Melbourne from October to May. In winter the temperature in Boston levels out at 5
degree
Suggestion
degrees
under
Suggestion
below
zero, the during spring time it grows sharply until 24
degree
Suggestion
degrees
. It
hits
Suggestion
hit
a peak at the
point
of approximately 32 in August, after that it has a gradual reduction.
Similarly
, the temperature in Paris has the same trend. It reaches the lowest
point
in January at nearly 3
degree
Suggestion
degrees
,
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
it increases steadily July (24) and levels off for one month
then
declines moderately to 4
degree
Suggestion
degrees
in December. The Melbourne trend is absolutely opposite, it started from the
point
of 26 in January,
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
it reduced by 10 degrees and hit the bottom at 16, after that it climbed mildly
to
Suggestion
in
December, and reached the same
point
as in January (26).
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