The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books and they shouldn’t waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such as computer software, videos and DVDs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • limited resources
  • hi-tech media
  • computer software
  • videos
  • DVDs
  • enhance
  • library experience
  • accessibility
  • diverse media
  • manage effectively
  • balancing resources
  • crucial
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