Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?

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No doubt
, there are many poor people living in every nation, but they have
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problem by different methods. I will explain some reasons
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further back than; at the back of; at the far side of
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along with the ways to solve
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issue in the upcoming paragraphs.
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The first
and the foremost,
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the reason
why every country's people face
poverty
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is that unemployment, as in
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modern era, in every industry, company and factory have machineries and robots, which take places of employees and they are
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, they unable to
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their families demand.
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, lack of job opportunities is the
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reason.
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, corruption is another cause of
poverty
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, owing to the bribes in government and private sectors, many needed individuals does not get their own rights.
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as, some blue collar workers does not take their full wages.
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, every nation have poor people.
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, to solve
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concern the
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remedy is government should give job opportunities to one member of each family. If everyone have job by which he or she will earn money and both
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ends
meet
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this
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problem could be solved. So, employment plays an indispensable role to solve
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problem.
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,
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adult
adults'
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school is another solution, because illiteracy people who could not understand their rights, they can get knowledge about their rights and could push back to corruption
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why, education could mark as
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the fight
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. In conclusion,
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, there are innumerable reasons behind
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issue, it can be eliminated by taking some necessary steps. I hope that, if
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the authorities
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rule, then
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consequences of
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could be fruitful.
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