Some people think that it is better for a country's economy for people to spend money while others believe that it would be better for people to save money. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The most important consideration in
country
`s is economy. For the recession to develop there must be a turnover of money.Some people think that spending money will help a
country
`s economy to be leading and prosperous in the long rush and I agree.
For instance
, some information about Kazakhstan recession. Our
country
makes a lot`s of export product which help to our homey stay afloat.
However at
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However, at
the same time we purchase products from other countries because it is cheaper.
This
is due to the price of our products. We will have more benefits if sell production to another
country
and buy material for the citizen.
Nevertheless
,
this
doesn't always work perfectly.
On the other hand
, I
also
want to say
that is
difficult save economic position always in well conditionals. Kazakhstan is excellent rustic for businesses because we have low fees. One major drawback is people leave Kazakhstan for something new and different. They try to find something better for themselves.
Moreover I
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Moreover, I
somewhat agree with them.
For example
, people choosing neighbouring Kyrgyzstan to relax in the summer, send their children to study in other countries simply because education in other countries is sometimes or more often at the same price as in Kazakhstan
,
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,
but the quality is much lower. In my opinion I can say about
this
just because. I love my
country
and I want to be useful here, but I cannot I have to choose another variant which able to give me more and better. So I'm in favour of spending capital, even in a slightly different way, to invest it in something profitable and if you invest money
also
in your
country
and thereby help it, what could be better?
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  • Disposable income
  • Consumer expenditure
  • Economic growth
  • Financial security
  • Standard of living
  • Economic downturn
  • Savings rate
  • Investment
  • Infrastructure
  • Innovation
  • Market demand
  • Economic stability
  • Interest rates
  • Macroeconomics
  • Sustainable growth
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