Some people think that it is better for a country's economy for people to spend money while others believe that it would be better for people to save money. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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The most important consideration in

country

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`s is economy. For the recession to develop there must be a turnover of money.Some people think that spending money will help a

country

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`s economy to be leading and prosperous in the long rush and I agree.

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, some information about Kazakhstan recession. Our

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makes a lot`s of export product which help to our homey stay afloat.

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the same time we purchase products from other countries because it is cheaper.

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is due to the price of our products. We will have more benefits if sell production to another

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and buy material for the citizen.

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doesn't always work perfectly.

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difficult save economic position always in well conditionals. Kazakhstan is excellent rustic for businesses because we have low fees. One major drawback is people leave Kazakhstan for something new and different. They try to find something better for themselves.

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somewhat agree with them.

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, people choosing neighbouring Kyrgyzstan to relax in the summer, send their children to study in other countries simply because education in other countries is sometimes or more often at the same price as in Kazakhstan

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but the quality is much lower. In my opinion I can say about

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just because. I love my

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and I want to be useful here, but I cannot I have to choose another variant which able to give me more and better. So I'm in favour of spending capital, even in a slightly different way, to invest it in something profitable and if you invest money

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in your

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and thereby help it, what could be better?

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

283 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Disposable income
Consumer expenditure
Economic growth
Financial security
Standard of living
Economic downturn
Savings rate
Investment
Infrastructure
Innovation
Market demand
Economic stability
Interest rates
Macroeconomics
Sustainable growth

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