Today, more and more students are deciding to move to another country for their studies. Do you think this is a good or bad Idea?

In recent times, the numbers of students going abroad to
further
there
of them or themselves
their
education has increased. ~which~ Some people believe its a good development while others
sees
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see
it as a drawback. In my opinion, I think travelling to other nations is a positive idea because of the exposure and sustainable relationships between countries
Firstly
, studying in another sovereign state, will bring about the vulnerability to see and learn new things in terms of exposure. It is said that several countries with different ways of life. *
However
*, students are able to gain access to
civilization and
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civilization, and
in turn, it
bring
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brings
about a productive society due to the fact that some of them would come back to
there
of them or themselves
their
home country to impact whatever they have learnt.
For example
, in Nigeria, most of the development we have today, are all
as a result
of some of our scholars that went abroad to study. *
Consequently
*, it led to the growth of the
economy
and personal development. Another point to consider is that it fosters healthy relationships between nations. Most individuals that are in other countries today,
initially
went there to study and decided to stay back to work adding to the gross domestic product of the
economy
. *
As a result
of
this
,
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,
* the association of nations become stronger in terms of trade and so on.
For instance
, tourism is now a major part of
economy
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economic
growth
such
as Dubai. To conclude, studying abroad
might seems
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might seem
bad to
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worse, to
worse to
some but
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some, but
it is more beneficial to students in terms of exposure and
also
the
countries
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country's
economy
in terms of positive relationships.
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