Today, more and more students are deciding to move to another country for their studies. Do you think this is a good or bad Idea?

In recent times, the numbers of students going abroad to

further

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there

of them or themselves

their

education has increased. ~which~ Some people believe its a good development while others

sees

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see

it as a drawback. In my opinion, I think travelling to other nations is a positive idea because of the exposure and sustainable relationships between countries

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, studying in another sovereign state, will bring about the vulnerability to see and learn new things in terms of exposure. It is said that several countries with different ways of life. *

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*, students are able to gain access to

civilization and

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civilization, and

in turn, it

bring

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brings

about a productive society due to the fact that some of them would come back to

there

of them or themselves

their

home country to impact whatever they have learnt.

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, in Nigeria, most of the development we have today, are all

as a result

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of some of our scholars that went abroad to study. *

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*, it led to the growth of the

economy

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and personal development. Another point to consider is that it fosters healthy relationships between nations. Most individuals that are in other countries today,

initially

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went there to study and decided to stay back to work adding to the gross domestic product of the

economy

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. *

As a result

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of

this

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,

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,

* the association of nations become stronger in terms of trade and so on.

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, tourism is now a major part of

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economy

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economic

growth

such

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as Dubai. To conclude, studying abroad

might seems

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might seem

bad to

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worse, to

worse to

some but

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some, but

it is more beneficial to students in terms of exposure and

also

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the

countries

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country's

economy

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in terms of positive relationships.