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In some countries, the number of people who visit art galleries is declining. Waht are the reasons for this? How can we solve this problem.

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Undoubtedly, time by time people who appreciate art are expressing less interested in it than it used to be,
as a result
for
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of
from
 it statistics shows that the number of arts
centres
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centre
centre's
 visitors are considerately decreasing all around the work. In
this
 essay, I shall refer to my point of view reason why it might be happening as well as some practical solutions, which can be embraced in order to solve
this
 issue. Personally, I believe that the technological wave present at
this
 age is affecting pretty much the physical assistance to cultural centres, provided that there are some online and free tours offered people prefer just jump to the website, rather than expending heaps of money travelling to the real place.
Secondly
, I consider that getting access to all of those well-recognised art galleries is becoming
unaffordable
 regarding the ticket prices, to give an illustration I would like to refer to the Louvre museum in Paris, where the entrance ticket is far more expensive than any other activity in the country,
this
 couplet with the long queue waiting for the visitors every day.
Therefore it
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Therefore, it
make
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makes
 the place inaccessible for tourists.
On the other hand
, some actions can be taken by the administrations
such
 as reducing the price of the entry, not only
this but
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this, but
also
 a fund needs to be created in order to replace that income
that is
 coming due to the ticket price discount. To conclude,
although
 few would argue outright against the statements and solutions mentioned in
this
 essay, I highly consider measures should be created in order to commit more people and art.
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