A government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety. Therefore, some people think that the government should increase spending on defence but spend less on social benefits. To what extent do you agree?

Until now there has been a serious increase in crime rates in several countries.

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is one of the problems that have invited much debate over the past few years regarding the division in

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defense

(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies

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and social spending on

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budgets. Many say that one of the most important rights that must be given by the state

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to the people is the protection and safety of citizens compared to their

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. In

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essay, the author will explain why many citizens ask for more funds for

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, and the author will

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explain why the

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does not need to increase spending on

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(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies

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. One of the main reasons why many people are asking for more funds to be improved compared to social

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is because citizens want to have a very strong military force in their

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. Because the stronger a

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's military,

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they will get respect from other countries and maybe even that

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will become a leader in the region which will certainly provide a great advantage for their

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. Another reason lies in the problem of terrorism; currently many countries are facing a serious threat and even experiencing terrorist attacks in big cities.

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are some who argue that increasing police force will threaten terrorist organizations, and may arrest them before the terrorists carry out attacks.

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, if the

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increases their expenditure on military

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defense

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, it will automatically reduce spending on social benefits that can affect people's

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, especially on

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. Because citizens have the right to get

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care, as well as the medicines they need. If the

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does not provide adequate resources in

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the poor and middle income people will find it difficult to get proper

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care. If

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expenses are reduced, the cost of life-saving operations and treatments will be quite expensive to cause bankruptcy. It will

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affect aid for those who need it. If the

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cuts assets to unemployed people, it can lead to bigger problems

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as homelessness, theft and increased crime. Meanwhile, if the people who need to get adequate support

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as work centres and finance, they are less likely to be a threat to other communities. In conclusion, the author does not agree with the statement that the

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is required to reduce spending on social benefits or the

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of citizens for the sake of national

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defense

(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies

defence

. State security is indeed an important aspect, but it does not rule out sacrificing social benefits for the

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of citizens.