The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Both maps
ıllustrate
an Correct your spelling
illustrate
island
’s changes, before and after the reorganization of tourism.
As can be seen on the maps, an island
was unused, whereas
the second
map shows that loads of new buildings has
been added. The total length of Change the verb form
have
island
is 100 metres.
Add an article
the island
It is clear that
the middle of area
was uninhabited, Add an article
the area
however
the east and Add the comma(s)
,however
west
surrended
with trees, Correct your spelling
surrounded
additionally
, the end of the west
part had a beach.
Moving to the second
one, except on
the Change preposition
in
west
part, the whole area has almost changed. The accommodation areas appear Replace the word
western
the
middle and the Change preposition
in the
west
of the island
. Moreover
, there are Add an article
a restaurant
restaurant
, Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
reception
where are situated side by side. The modes of transportation are the Correct word choice
and reception
foothpaths-the
main roads among houses, Correct your spelling
footpaths-the
as well as
to railway-which links to Pier-Reception-Restaurant
roadway. By the way, the pier is in the south of Correct article usage
the Pier-Reception-Restaurant
island
. Add an article
the island
By contrast
, beach
did not use Add an article
the beach
as
Change preposition
for
a
swimming.
Remove the article
apply
Overall
, an
Correct article usage
the
island
is currently based on as
Change preposition
apply
a
tourism industry, the man-made activity has expanded.Correct article usage
the
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