Your local newspaper had an advertisement asking people to help with environmental projects in your area. Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help. Describe a local environmental issue Explain how you can help Suggest how to avoid the problem in future

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in connection with the advertisement published yesterday, in the local newspaper, asking volunteers for the environmental projects in the vicinity. I want to draw your attention to the scarcity of
trees
in the Model Town area. The construction activity has turned the lush green area into a concrete jungle. The area requires
trees
, and
this
keeps not only inner streets in the shade during the summers but
also
be vital to reducing the increasing threshold of toxic gases in the proximity. I am working, as an Environmental Conservation officer, in the Forest Department, Chandigarh. I want to do my part by providing
trees
for
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required in the locality. I am
also
associated with various NGO's and organizations and can provide volunteers willing to work for the environment. The local authorities are required to keep a regular check on the illegal cutting of
trees
and penalized the offenders involved in doing
such
malpractices.
Also
, all the newly planted saplings need to be protected by fencing. I hope you consider my proposal and make it approved at the earliest opportunity. I look forward to a positive response. Yours sincerely, Kuldip Kumar
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