Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are thaught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have various positions regarding whether children should be taught to be cooperative or competitive. While the sense of cooperation can sometimes be useful, I generally believe that the spirit of competition can contribute to beneficial person in the future. There are two principal reasons why some people are of the opinion that the sense of cooperation must be applauded among people.

Firstly

, despite of

hardshipness

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the hardships

hardships

which are in the cooperation, unity among children can assist them to recognize themselves better than the earlier time, so their unfavourable traits can be eliminated. Presence at an appointed time

,

Accept space

,

for instance

, in the gathering can promote the punctuality of children can yield profitable results not only in the working atmosphere which the social status can be estimated by it but

also

family life which their

serinity

a disposition free from stress or emotion

serenity

can be estimated by it.

Secondly

, if people took part in collaborative activities, their social interaction would be intensified. Take their ability to cooperate with peers can be strengthened as an example;

This

elevation can keep people from mental disorders in aging namely solitude. On the flip side, others argue that

instiling

teaching or impressing upon the mind by frequent instruction or repetition

instilling

the sense of

championship

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the championship

can raise critical thinking in children. Since children demand to acquire triumph among their rivals, these worthwhile

tendency

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tendencies

enforce them to identify not only their personality flaws which can hinder them to reach their

qoals but

Accept comma addition

goals, but

goals but

also

boosting their positive aspects of their personality which can play a critical role in their success. It is crystal clear that these amazing

achivements

the action of accomplishing something

achievements

can divulge the hidden aspect of their individuality

,

Accept space

,

the reason is that they must speculate in the manifold aspects of matters and can lead to making a better decision. In my perspective, intense competition between children

can taught

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can teach

them that nothing in the world is justice and they must strive to

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

their ambition as well as they can think

deely

to a great depth psychologically

deeply

daily

dally

in

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on

various issues. In conclusion, both of these perspectives are common through people,

however

, it seems to me that fierce competition among children can prepare a foundation of prosperity in their adult life.