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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Over the past few decades, the number shows a drastic change in amount of miscarriage and now it's become a controversial subject in society. Few individuals believe that government should ban the miscarriage process, whereas remaining people are not in favour of
this
 viewpoint. In
this
 essay I will elaborate both the opinions along with my vision
that is
 authorities should allow it with certain rules and regulations. Increase in population becoming the main reason for various problems. Nowadays, physical attraction is increasing in underage teenagers. It is happening because of getting different knowledge From various sites. But at the end it tends to unnatural delivery of a child or
abortion
Suggestion
aborted
. Some people are against of doing miscarriage process legal because they thought it will damage body structure as well as it will cause
further
 calamities after giving birth to new born baby.
In addition
 to
this
, if it's because legal everyone try to do physical relation without thinking
further
 problems
besides
 it will increase uncertainty in society.
In contrast
 to
this
, other thinks that it should be permitted as legal. So that it will help the new married couple to focus on their career rather than taking sudden responsibility of the child.
Also
abortion
 will help to reduce the population of the country. Many times people found that infants outside the road and railway tracks. These children are from parents who are not ready to take responsibility that's why they prefer to drop the infant anywhere rather than take away with them. Unfortunately, it increases the number of orphan homes and indirectly population. I believe it should be controlled by making
abortion
 development, legal by adding some rules
such
 as the person should be averaged and able to give birth in the future after some tests related to
this
 proceeding. In conclusion,
abortion
 is not an option for making life easier, but it will give some time to think about whether the parents are ready to take care of new responsibility.
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