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, nowadays. I consider it a positive development because it provides an opportunity for the general public to portray their artistic work and talents.
, there are a few drawbacks to
technology that should be kept in mind.
It is granted that
and the
have brought a lot of benefits to mankind, but their inadvertent use to grab the attention of the general public has brought forward various social issues. Many
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times, to film a daunting act and upload it on the
for appraisal and fame,
have lost their lives.
, I came across a recent report in which a young boy in Pakistan lay in front of a train and died in an attempt to make a video of his act and upload it on the
.
, the popularity can urge immature minds to do certain acts
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their precious lives.
, it is beyond any doubt that
and the
are playing a remarkable role in the acknowledgement of the artistic effort of talented
. The recognition of real talents and earning fame was not that easy in the
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era.
had to travel across the globe spreading
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word about their inventions and extraordinary work. But with the advent of the
and
, it is quite feasible to upload
masterpieces on the
and attract
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public attention.
, it took a
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time to Pablo Picasso to become an eminent artist. Had he been living in the era of the
and
, he would have achieved the same glory
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much earlier in his life.
, a recent famous
documentary about a boy who belonged to a remote tribe
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is another example. That young mind, without any schooling, invented how to create electricity and
used it to add light to the gloomy nights of his fellow tribesmen. Indeed, his extraordinary artistic work would have gone unnoticed
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had he been living in
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historical times.
, despite a few drawbacks, I think that
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and social media are playing a great role in portraying the outstanding performance and talents of
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. It is,
, suggested that the authorities should devise effective
and
checks to avoid their misuse.