The top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014

The bar chart outlines the
travel
expenditure in ten countries which have had the highest rate in 2014 based on data was collected from UNWTO. According to the graph China stand in the
first
place after United states while Taiwan had the tenth position. Now returning to details
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the Chinese
have allocated almost 110 billions US dollars to
travel
in 2014 while the US and Germany each with its nearly 82 billions spending, have attained the
second
and
third
position.The UK spent 55 billion less that half of China and more than double than that of Singapore. It is interesting to notice that there is a significant difference between Singapore as the fifth country and China as the
first
one regarding to
travel
expenditure.It have been
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spending
20 billion in Singapore on
travel
while it is almost five times higher in China.
Morever
This
difference is not remarkable between Hong Kong
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South Korea
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India
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Malaysia and Taiwan.It could be seen Taiwan and Malaysia stood at the bottom of the list with around 10 to 12 billions spending for the same.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Expenditure
  • Destinations
  • Global economy
  • Tourist influx
  • Consumption patterns
  • Luxury travel
  • Budget tourism
  • Outbound tourism
  • Disposable income
  • Exchange rates
  • Tourism sector
  • Hospitality industry
  • Inbound tourism
  • Travel advisories
  • Infrastructure
  • Revenue generation
  • Cultural heritage
  • Leisure activities
  • Global events
  • Tourist demographics
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