some people give praise to famous scientists and mathematicians. others think more highly of literary authors and artists than scientists or mathematicians. which group of professionals do you regard more highly and why? include specific details and examples to support your choice.

Careers and occupations play a significant role in a society in terms of
kind
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the kind
a kind
of
commiunication
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
communications
which have with people.
Also
, it is important that how much vital and important they are for the society and it create a widespread
attitud
a complex mental state involving beliefs and feelings and values and dispositions to act in certain ways
attitude
attitudes
from
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of
people
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the people
toward them.
the
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The
role and importance of scientists and mathematicians has been
vivid
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vividly
since the creation of civilization up to now and the difficulty of these careers has been
invetiable
incapable of being avoided or prevented
inevitable
for all, the one reason that people give praise to them is that learning most of the
scienses
the place where some action occurs
scenes
sciences
science
and involving with maths are hard
to
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for
ordinary people, even for relevant pupils so, in their mind being
scientist
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a scientist
is
unaccesable
capable of being reached only with great difficulty or not at all
inaccessible
inexcusable
.
Also
, achievement of mathematics always lead to
facilites
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
for people and a new innovation or treatment which
eas
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
is
was
continuing
life
in
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on
this
planet that all
cause
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causes
to another group of,
leveling
changing the ground level to a smooth horizontal or gently sloping surface
levelling
up the quality of
life
.
On the other hand
, professionals
such
as, literary authors and artists, have an another quality
for
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of
life
by
acossiated
make a logical or causal connection
associated
with metal sphere. Some people think, they need to some motivations for keeping
life
and regard the careers which make them feel alive. For
instances
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instance
, when they read a novel or watch a
commedy
light and humorous drama with a happy ending
comedy
they exit from their mould and involve with a new world which is interesting even for some hours. To sum up, in my opinion, scientists and mathematicians are
mor
used to form the comparative of some adjectives and adverbs
more
prisable
liable to perish; subject to destruction or death or decay
perishable
than literary authors or artists because, the achievement of the
first
group directly have
impact
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impacted
our
life
and without them we haven’t been at the
levele
a position on a scale of intensity or amount or quality
level
levels
label
which now we are.
Although
authoritis
Suggestion
the authors
authors
authors'
authorities
and artists always amuse us in bad or good situations; their
rols
the actions and activities assigned to or required or expected of a person or group
roles
rolls
rules
arn’t
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aren’t
vital in our
life
.
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