Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

In Modern time, most of the city developing sectors developing day by day. Even in construction field renovation takes place and urban cities having a lot of incredible fashioned buildings. In order to build sky towered buildings and other kinds of buildings has many processes through the governmental agencies. It is thought that the government should control and assess the quality of its building, but someone opine that the controlling should not be applied to the owner or the designer to build. In my opinion, it is necessary to get assessed by public agencies to qualify the safeties for the people and the appearance of the city. On the one hand, agencies should involve in that permission process of the building process and even design, in order to check its safety and quality.
Therefore
, I agree with
this
opinion and support it.
For example
, in my home country Mongolia, construction field is fast paced developing nowadays and it has many processes to confirm the usage of the building. Even after it is constructed, the building should be assessed by the state
examination
Suggestion
examining
board in order to check its safety and quality.
Thus
, I agree with
this
view.
On the other hand
, some people oppose
this
point if view and it is thought that controlling and other issue should be on the owner side and they should build what they want to build. Under control of the government agencies, it might take a lot of pressure and processes to get through to build. Control of the government can lead to bribing issue.
Therefore
, these people contradict with
this
problem.
For instance
, In Mongolia, we have so many issues related to the bribery in the construction field and even in the Land. In conclusion, there are different views on authority under the Government agencies. I truly support one has control under the public agencies, because those agencies will consider about the safety of the building and even the design.
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