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Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold. to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Owing to the power of advertisements, products have been sold to people not actually requiring it. I agree
to
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with
this
 opinion, as commercials are made so glamorous nowadays that they tempt people to actually purchase them. The extensive increase of commercial and advertisements force people to buy items which
is not required
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are not required
 by them. These firms
have identify
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have identified
 the psyche of normal people and employ famous actors and
sports man
someone who engages in sports
sportsman
 whose life is envied by
general population
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the general population
. They make the commercials so glamorous and out of the world that people in fact become
spell bound
having your attention fixated as though by a spell
spellbound
 to buy them.
This
 has resulted in our people becoming brand conscious,
consequently
 with
new launch
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a new launch
the new launch
 of Louis Vuitton and Gucci people rush to buy the products even they don’t require it. The advertisement
companies resulting
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companies, resulting
 in
sale
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the sale
sales
 of products
is
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are
 successful in selling unnecessary things as they target young people and teenagers. They have a fragile mind and result in purchasing of unnecessary products.
For instance
,
this
 is especially true for junk foods, when the famous actors are eating junk food or drinking soft drinks in a commercial but still appear slim and smart.
This
 persuades people that these junk
food
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foods
 are not high calorie and not hazardous to health and they start consuming it.
On the contrary
, the famous actors might not be using these unhealthy
food
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foods
 and drinks in real life. In conclusion, the
advertisement
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advertising
 industry has turned
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
 mafia which is responsible for selling items not required by the people and
this
 tendency should be curbed at the earliest.
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