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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #information #research #business #world
Nowadays, everything has their own value. Information is
also
 not an exception. It always be shared freely on
Internet
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the Internet
 or for
research
 but some cannot. Why? As massive information shared freely
to
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for
research
 or business, it’s a good thing for all
country
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countries
. If the
research
 works well their
country
 will improve a lot and they can help
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
country
 develop well and help
thir
of them or themselves
their
three
there
 people will richer and don’t have to work a lot to have much money so each person can happier and enjoy with their life.
On the other
hand some
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hand, some
 information must be kept secret and no longer can be shared with anyone because it can be a national security or something bigger can be used to activate the nuclear power. If that information spread out to the
research
, and bad organization can steal it, it’s gonna be a big trouble with the
country
. The organization can use it to exchange money, but
that
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that's
 just a small problem. If they use to kill people around the world, no one can stop them because they are in the dark. We cannot easily find them.
To
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In
 my opinion, everything cannot be free because some of them are too
valueable
having great material or monetary value especially for use or exchange
valuable
, so we must depend on how it can impact to the life. (212 words)
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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