some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. others, however believe that school is the place to learn this. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a

point

that parents should teach kids about

society

and the most common ways to be an essential and

appropirate

suitable for a particular person or place or condition etc

appropriate

person among others.

Nevertheless

, there is another

point

that studying at

school

and getting a knowledge about

society

from

school

teachers is the best place to carry out

this

. In my opinion, it is a good idea that kids should get

education

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educated

about

society

from their parents. It would be superb to get experience from people who grow up you because they passed a great way in order to be an important individual among other people. The

first

view, in terms of getting much more knowledge about

society

a few people consider that it would be better parents to educate their kids about rules or moral of

society

. Because, in their

point

of view, parents have a great experience and they know much better than whoever how to behave among public and how to be a person who will contribute

for

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to

in

developing

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the development

development

of mankind.

For instance

, they can tell their kids about

mistakes

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the mistakes

which they had done in the course of their life and share invaluable experience which they have. The

second

view is that

teacher

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a teacher

teachers

the teacher

or someone else in educational organizations should teach kids how to avoid mistakes, and develop their own

sence

a general conscious awareness

sense

senses

of being a good individual among

society

and contribute as much as possible in order to build a bright future. They think so because

school

might be the best place to learn it,

for

instance kids

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instance, kids

will read literature which is

plays

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playing

an essential role in developing a sense of

decent

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decency

, civilised behaviour. Or while they are studying at

school

they can make a mistake or they might have a bad behaviour which will be corrected by

teacher

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the teacher

and they will be told about

rules

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the rules

of behaving in public. Teachers will help kids

to develop

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develop

their skills and

point

out on mistakes that they have made. In conclusion, I would say that both of

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plural of "this"

these

views have

thier

of them or themselves

their

benefits and

drawback

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drawbacks

,

however despite

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however, despite

this

fact, In my opinion kids had better to get

education

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an education

from parents because no one except parents will take care of kids, and they will do their best in order to grow up an

idial

conforming to an ultimate standard of perfection or excellence; embodying an ideal

ideal

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individual.

Although

teachers will teach kids how to be a helpful person in public as well,

however it

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however, it

is not enough, because there a lot of kids who study at

school

and teachers will have no time to each of them and it can lead to some bad consequences.