News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print on newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

The news rewriters establish televisions and
newspaters
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspapers
. They choose news and spread it on televisions and newspapers on
channel
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a channel
the channel
channels
which they relate.
Usally
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Usually
news casters
someone who broadcasts the news
newscasters
use to make false news for public entertainment. And sometimes they spread true news. In
this
new era, channels display those news which is
source
Suggestion
a source
of entertainment. They
actully
in actual fact
actually
want to shock the public with rumours, false news and entertainment. It is the
source
to gain
television rating point
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television rating points
a television rating point
the television rating point
they earn
alot
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a lot
from it. As we can see corruption became ordinary in
media
Suggestion
the media
. They print and broadcast for what they paid. There
are
Suggestion
is
very less amount of news channels who take stand for truth.
usually
Suggestion
Usually
, Media prints and telecast bad news for their fame
because, people get
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, because people get
shock
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a shock
form
a giver or sender
from
their shocking news and public give more reacts on their channels which is the
source
of biggest earning. The main point is Media made public deadly use to of bad news. Lots of
negativety
the character of the negative electric pole
negativity
is building due to bad news, People starting
hate
Suggestion
to hate
each other. Even it is not only harmful for
people but
Accept comma addition
people, but
this
negativety
the character of the negative electric pole
negativity
is calling the war between
contries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
and countries can destroy from it, According to me, Social media is the biggest
source
of communication. It can
ouercome
win a victory over
overcome
the lots of problems from countries by
spreding
process or result of distributing or extending over a wide expanse of space
spreading
the positivity all over. Good news would
nurish
provide with nourishment
nourish
the public mind and will
vanish
expel from a community or group
banish
negativity. Social media should stop their side businesses and should would for economic development and betterment. To sum up, for
development
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the development
of
country
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the country
a country
. It is
mendatory
required by rule
mandatory
to spread positivity by social media. Do not make the social
plat form
a raised horizontal surface
platform
a earning point. Media should support truth, honestly and
positivety
extremely
positively
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demographics
  • Engagement
  • Relevance
  • Urgency
  • Natural disasters
  • Political upheavals
  • Public health concerns
  • Advertising revenue
  • Sponsorship deals
  • Market competition
  • Editorial policies
  • Censorship
  • Newsworthy
  • Desensitization
  • Bad news fatigue
  • Negativity bias
  • Balanced view
  • Social media
  • Viral content
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