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Some teachers think that international students exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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The mixture of pupil international student and domestic leaner can make lot impact on lot different ways. Some teachers believe that it is fruitful to have an international scholar in schools while others believe it have had negative aspects.
To begin
 with, having international learners in a school can result, several effects on teenage lifestyle,
such
 as there is an opportunity to learn foreign language, lifestyle of other nations, customs and cultures. Apart from that, teenage can compare which results that schools can produce highly competitive students.
On the other hand
, some believe that it has some bad points. Mixture of international and domestic graduate lead to competition, the learner start comparing with others which results violence, argument, debates. International students can be faced racism whenever different rituals meet together. In my opinion,
This
 is beneficial to having international pupil in schools where you can learn and experience about foreign countries.
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