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Some people believe that it is good for students to have the same teacher for several years. Other think students benefit more from having new teachers each year. Which do you think is better? Give specific reasons to support your opinion.

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 is part of life, from the seasons, to relationships with people, to the stages of life. For some it is a positive, stimulating thing while for others it is the result of problems. Even in the world of school,
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 changing the
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, represents a big
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 that can be seen in different ways by both students and teachers. Having the same
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 or students for years can produce the positive effect of proceeding on mutual knowledge, not having to
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 study or teach methods, plan educational programs over
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. At the same
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, the absence of
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 can lead to a flattening of the stimuli by the student or the
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 in trying to give more and more and to adapt to a single learning or teaching method. I personally believe that
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 is a source of growth and for students
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, changing the
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 every year, adapting to different study methods, getting used to facing school and life in a different way from
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 to
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 can only be one positive thing. In conclusion, even if changing doesn't always mean improving, in order to improve you have to
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, even at school.
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