some people believe that after child enters School their teachers influence more than the parents to what extent do you agree or disagree

The majority of parents think that the
influence
of teachers on their children is more
powerfull
having great power or force or potency or effect
powerful
. Overall, I wholeheartedly disagree with
this
statement because parents and teachers have
completely different
Suggestion
a completely different influence
influence
on children upbringing where parents play
more essential role
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a more essential role
.
Firstly
, few people can deny the fact that parents have been
influencing
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influenced
on children since birth, thereof children enter to
school
with some base of behaviour, which bring from home. Teachers the most complain,
for example
, on home upbringing because some pupils come rude and
mischievious
naughtily or annoyingly playful
mischievous
.
Likewise
, have been noticed by many teachers that throughout
entire educational
Suggestion
the entire educational process
process
behaviours of pupils have been unchanging.
Consequently
, parents always have crucial role on children, even when they in
school
.
Moreover
, teachers throughout all educational
process
have been
developing
Suggestion
developed
at students some social skills as part of educational
program
Suggestion
programs
and demands studying
process
. In my
school
,
for instance
, we have subject "Ethic" that consist of common social rules,
additionally
all teachers are demanding discipline and comply with hierarchy.
Therefore
, the
influence
of teachers
have
Suggestion
has
more common character than parents because teachers teach groups of young people share rules, whereas parents give traditions, habits and even a point of view on many things
to
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in
one.
Thus
, teachers cannot be more
influence
due to they have
completely different type
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completely different types
a completely different type
of impact and time. To conclude, all the time that children enter
to
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school
school
parents bother about many factors and one is
upbringing their
Accept comma addition
upbringing, their
children,
inusmach
(followed by as) in such a degree; in such a manner; seeing that; considering that; since
inasmuch
in-asmuch
insomuch
as teachers play some role
on
Suggestion
in
this
process
.
Nevertheless
, parents miss one small detail that children a half of day in educational establishments where studying in groups, thereby teachers cannot have enough time for teaching an individual person.
Hence
, I believe that parents have the most powerful impact on children.
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