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With an increasing population communicating via the internet messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past.

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Along with the advance of technology, there are a significant number of individuals connecting with one another via online chatting;
hence
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face
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 to
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communication
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 is believed to be
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dying
 out. Personally, I totally disagree with
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 point of view for several reasons. Primarily, it’s direct
contact
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 that plays an integral part of
communication
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 thanks to the matter of security. When using online texting, the messages or even all users’ conversations could possibly leak out due to the rampancy of cyber hackers.
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, Facebook and Google continuously be found to let the information of users be stolen.
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, individuals can feel insecure if they often discuss important business or private information on the Internet, as their messages or phone calls can be furtively read by hackers.
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,
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 to
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 talking is the most reliable means of
communication
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.
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 reasons for my disapproval of
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 to
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contact
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 being vanished is that
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humans
a human
 could only feel sympathy and awareness of each other by communicating directly. Not only the matter of verbal conveyance, but
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 the gestures that show the sympathy for each
other
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other, such
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 as hugs, smiles,… cannot be transferred entirely via simple
emojis
an iconic mental representation
images
 on Internet messaging.
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, people can avoid misapprehending each other when
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face
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, because they can express their true feelings and can’t hide their emotions like they communicate via online messaging. To sum up, despite the
dramatically
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dramatic
 growth of Internet popularity, especially messaging, I would argue that
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 to
face
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contact
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 will remain the most essential means of humankind’s
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 in regards to security and feeling expression.
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, in order to close the gap between each other, people should spend more time with their beloved friends and families, rather than chatting with virtual strangers.
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