A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

While many people assume that nationality
mixture
is irrelevant to the
development
of a
country
, in my opinion, it plays
crucial role
Suggestion
a crucial role
for both the entertainment and
development
Suggestion
the development
of a
country
.
Firstly
, having a various
mixture
of nationalities can bring in cultural diversity, which means different kinds of core values, traditions, entertainment activities and dining rituals. All these deviations can result in
diverse society
Suggestion
a diverse society
with many
enjoyful
events that makes the base of an interesting lifestyle as a whole.
For example
, Mongolia has many ethnic groups that all have sub-cultures. So, various activities are organized throughout the year. Due to
this
, we are able to experience pleasant ceremonies and enjoy many foods, which brings us all together as a
country
and enables interesting experiences.
That is
why I strongly believe that having different nationalities is a key to an adventurous society.
Secondly
,
country's
Suggestion
the country's development results
development
results from many contributing factors, but the reason why being a blend of nationalities is important is as different people have varying viewpoints and skills, so does different groups. So, the
country
is more able to build a society
that is
more structured and segmented evenly, which causes a rapid
development
. As an example,
USA
Suggestion
the USA
is a
mixture
of many ethnic groups,
thus
they are able to become one of the most powerful nation in the world. They are able to attract more tourists and develop all of their crucial segments equally. To conclude, I agree that
country
's
development
and entertainment is facilitated by the different
mixture
of groups. My reasoning is based on two main thoughts. When population is divided into nationality groups, the
country
is able to become more interesting
as a result
of different culture they bring and more developed due to their skill sets and opinions.
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