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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#communications #it’s #letters
In
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During
 the past centuries,
letter
happening at a time subsequent to a reference time
later
 became the only source of communication and it wrote with care and endless love.
However
, nowadays,
aTechnology
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a Technology
 has brought a revolution in
this
 field and entirely alter the thinking of people about
this
. I partly agree with
this
 statement, but still today, someone prefers the traditional method.
Undoubtedly there
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Undoubtedly, there
 is a community who till relies on the ancient mode of conversation because of its feeling. They feel a sense of happiness to look at their expressions, which are embedded in words.
Moreover
, the senior citizens are not comfortable with the automation and they do not depend on them.
Similarly
, some business from still believe
on
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in
 the credibility of letters.
Nevertheless
, the way an advancement has adopted the sector of telecommunication has reduced the importance of
previous modes
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the previous modes
. Now, the folks use the machinery for a quick conversation with their beloved ones, despite the fact, how far they are from each other.
In addition
, they are not worried about the piece of paper, pen or grammatical errors. The internet has resolved all of these problems.
Furthermore
, people easily work in foreign countries without the gap with their families. Because they daily talk with them and not realise the loneliness or wait for their replies. There is a multitude of organisations, who expand their business all over the world through
this
 rapid, swift and reliable communication.
For instance
, a recent survey, which revealed the data, which illustrates the increments in the earnings of individuals as well as companies just due to
this
 modern communication. In conclusion, I personally believe that the benefits of the latest telecommunication for more than the traditional methods. As with the passage of time, it
also
 gains popularity in the minds of
old
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older
 generations.
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