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Nowadays media should include more good news in their publications Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Mass media
is
Suggestion
are
 the biggest
influencer
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influence
for
Suggestion
of
 anything in today’s time. It
being
Suggestion
is being
 so should cover a lot of happy information in its publications to attract optimism in the society.
This
 essay will discuss both views, related to its agreement and disagreement along with my opinion
further
. On the one hand, publishing of delighted stories in the newspapers or in any other form of distributing information, is a good way to bring
smile
Suggestion
a smile
 on the faces of everyone reading it.
Moreover
,
this
 will not only welcome happiness in their day but
also
 gives positive energy to the person to do more hard work in his day to day life to achieve more and fulfil his dreams. And can help the society by providing his services.
On the other hand
, it must not always focus on providing only positive circumstances of things, going around in
world
Suggestion
the world
,
instead
 these platforms should come up with
variety
Suggestion
a variety
 of information which includes the negative aspects of anything which is a matter of concern to humans around the globe.
As a result
 of
this
plural of "this"
these
 different countries can cumulatively discuss and can come to a solution to any problem which is being faced
by
Suggestion
with
 population
of
Suggestion
Of
 that particular area. In the end, I would say that in my opinion I strongly believe that both news, whether being good or bad should be published by the news channels, social media platforms or any other medium of communication. So that
authorities
Suggestion
the authorities
 and citizens of a country can join hands to solve any problem.
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