For many, shopping malls are great places to spend their leisure time and meet others. People, however, in the past mostly visited those when necessary. To what extent do you think this is a negative trend? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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or offering personalized service. Local business are not having enough sells leading them into ba

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One of the main problems caused by the extensive marketing and advertising of these businesses is a threat to the existence of small businesses. Another problem is due to excess money, large companies can buy several local stores and monopolize the

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in one area or country.

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, Amazon bought Whole Foods since they thought

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was a threat, so Amazon can monopolize the market. Whole Foods currently only sells Amazon products. Another problem is that people are buying products from huge industries.

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, local artisans who lose their way of life, as people today prefer to buy things from factories that look more aesthetically attractive. If the national population loses its way of life, over time the purchasing power of the community will decline. There are ways in which to attract people to buy local brands.

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, the government should allocate sufficient funds to encourage local brands in the form of subsidized loans, free rental locations, and daily monitoring.

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, people must play their part to make sure they try crazy brands.

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of buying the

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from a large company, they should try local products and review them on Google.

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, it would be improving the quality of your

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, putting it at the same level as major brands and giving more personalized plans to consumers. In conclusion, I think that what we can prevent small companies from going bankrupt are us

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itizens, since we should consume our national

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before abroad.

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, I think that it is very important to have small businesses since it generates many jobs and a great

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is the United States, where 85 million people live from local companies. In my opinion, large industries will always have advantages and give us a difficult fight, but at the same time it is a good thing.

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, if I am competing with a la

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ecognized brand in order to compete, I need to improve the quality of my

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and invest in marketing and ads.