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Many countries are spending a huge amount of money on supporting their competitors to take part in some worldwide competitions. Other argue that it would be better if these countries can spend money on the children to take part in sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some states prefer to invest a lot of
money
 to put their
sportives
relating to or interested in sports
sportive
supportive
 in global competition and some people claim
that is
 better to invest in
sport
 for young generation.From my point of view the both are very necessary
,
Accept space
,
but I agree that children have to be
encourage
Suggestion
encouraged
 to practice sports since an early age and for
this
gouverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
 has to have some implication. Nowadays, in many countries we can find children who got talent in sports.We have the moral obligation to find them and support them to become a good
performers
Suggestion
performer
 in
sport
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the sport
.
Gouverments
Suggestion
Governments
 should spend
many
Suggestion
much
 on
this
children
Suggestion
child
 because they are the future.From a very early age
,
Accept space
,
parents should encourage their children to practice
sport
 in order to
descover
discover or determine the existence, presence, or fact of
discover
 them if they are good in some area.Even if in
this
days
Suggestion
day
 many boys want to become a
footballier
an athlete who plays soccer
footballer
 and girls dancer or
gimnasts
an athlete who is skilled in gymnastics
gymnast
,
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,
because they think that in
this
 way became famous
,
Accept space
,
parents and teachers should try to encourage the rest of the sports
.
Accept space
.
On the other hand
, in order to become a good performer in
sport
Suggestion
the sport
 you have to invest a lot of
money
, not only for
sport
 things, but for personal image too.It is normal that a country to
suport
give moral or psychological support, aid, or courage to
support
 their competitors with
money
 in order to win the competition.There are many
bussines
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
 people who have
money
 and
whant
feel or have a desire for; want strongly
want
wants
what
 to invest in
sport
,
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,
in a
sportman
someone who engages in sports
sportsman
thet
pointing out something
that
 they like
,
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,
or a company could invest
money
 just for advertising.
This
 is a
trned
a general direction in which something tends to move
trend
 which can be
stoped
(of a nose) blocked
stopped
 and a lot of
money
are spend
Suggestion
is spent
is spending
spends
 in
this
 way. To conclude
,
Accept space
,
both sides are important
,
Accept space
,
we have to sustain our children to practice
sport
,
Accept space
,
because they are the
next
genaration
all the people living at the same time or of approximately the same age
generation
generations
 who could participate
to
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in
 a worldwide competition.
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