A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: • give information about the flat • provide any important instructions • say what he/she should do if there are any problems

#friend #apartment #information #instructions

Just writing to give you a few important details about my flat. Since we recently moved over, I am sure you are not familiar with the location. When you come down to Abby's Street you must have noticed the new supermarket that was built,

its

Replace the word

it's

it is

show examples

right opposite that, facing the main road. Once you get there, come to the 4th floor

Submitted by aabidmajeed on Mon May 18 2020

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your essays?

Submit an unlimited number of essays. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

0Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

61 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

Unlock the Full Potential of Writing9

Unlimited Essay Checks: Practice and perfect your skills.
Detailed Error Analysis: Spot every mistake.
In-Built Grammar Checker: Say no to grammatical errors.
Personalized Suggestions: Know how to boost your score.
Progress Tracking: View your checked essay history.
Still thinking? We have a 14-day money-back guarantee. Take a leap of faith!

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

4.5
band
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society? You should write at least 250 words.
In some countries, many pupils decide to choose other subject instead of science subject in university at this time. In my point of view, science become not attractive for many students because it seems difficult, complicated, and expensive to contibute on its research.
4.5
band
In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In our modern world, most portion of population are elder people and the number of youngsters are decrease becuase of the birth rate.Some people ague that it may creat troubles for government and public.This phenomenon has pros and cons,however, this essay will express that the advntages outweigh the drawbacks.
5
band
In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?
The past few years, a large number of small and local shops have been replaced by huge shopping centers and malls as costumers seem to prefer them. While I acknowledge that there are many drawbacks from this growth, I would argue that the benefits are more significant.
4
band
Shopping online has various advantages for consumers but it may also have several disadvantages including the loss of individual privacy. Do the advantages of online shopping for consumers outweigh the disadvantages?
In various nations around the world, many people are doing online shopping as this ease their life in so many aspects. However, there is a small group of people who dislike it. While there is clearly a drawback to this, I personally believe that the benefits are more significant.
7.5
band
It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the globalization era, the progression of technology has become a necessary part of daily life. Opinions are divided as to whether many technological devices and advance processes have negative effects on several original cultures in various countries. Personally, I believe that people in this decade can combine technology advance and local culture in a modern way.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society? You should write at least 250 words.

In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?

Shopping online has various advantages for consumers but it may also have several disadvantages including the loss of individual privacy. Do the advantages of online shopping for consumers outweigh the disadvantages?

It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?