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A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: • give information about the flat • provide any important instructions • say what he/she should do if there are any problems

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Just writing to give you a few important details about my flat. Since we recently moved over, I am sure you are not familiar with the location. When you come down to Abby's Street you must have noticed the new supermarket that was built,
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 right opposite that, facing the main road. Once you get there, come to the 4th floor
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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