In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their level of Health and Fitness is decreasing. what do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures should be taken to solve them?
Nowadays, Increase in
weight
of people is a severe issue in many nations. Drastic change in lifestyle and food
habits are the major causes. In my following essay, I will discuss points regarding the causes of the over weight
along with effective solutions.
Since last
decade, There are several changes in food
patterns of the people and this
changes
are Suggestion
change
cause
of Suggestion
causes
the cause
health
deterioration
. Nowadays womens
are excelling in every field and cook traditional an adult female person (as opposed to a man)
women
food
is a thing of past
. In a sharp contrast, Fast Suggestion
the past
food
is very easy to cook and available at every nook and cranny as fast food
business is on boom. Over consumption
of fast food
along with lack of physical exercise
is the major cause of over
usually describes a large person who is fat but has a large frame to carry it
overweight
weight
. It leads to several cronic
being long-lasting and recurrent or characterized by long suffering
chronic
health
diseases like obesity, diabetes, hiper
blood tension and heart issues. As per the recent survey in USA about 60% of more active than normal
hyper
poeple
are (plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
overwight
and from them 70% are the victims of usually describes a large person who is fat but has a large frame to carry it
overweight
consumption
of fast food
.
Drastic augmentation in use
of electronic gadgets Suggestion
the use
have converted
many people in couch Suggestion
has converted
potatos
. an edible tuber native to South America
potatoes
potato
Although
technology advancement has changed our life in positive ways, it ruin
Suggestion
ruins
health
of people too. Nowadays, each generation is busy with their electronic gadgets. Suggestion
the health
In other words
, children prefer to play video games on mobile or internet except physical outdoor games while young generation
Suggestion
the young generation
prefer
to watch television and for many Suggestion
prefers
professionals
Suggestion
professional
computer
became the important part of their life. These gadgets made them lazy and send invitation to numerous Suggestion
computers
health
issues like obesity and eye weakness.
The effective solution to this
problem is avoid
Suggestion
avoided
consumption
of fast food
. Prefer traditional food
with healthy diet
as "Three Suggestion
a healthy diet
colored
meal is a good choice". having color or a certain color; sometimes used in combination
coloured
In addition
, Do regular exercise
. It not only improve the physical health but
Accept comma addition
health, but
also
mental health
also
.
To recapitulate, over eating
of fast eating to excess (personified as one of the deadly sins)
overeating
food
, lack of exercise
, busy lifestyle and technological advancement are the causes of over
usually describes a large person who is fat but has a large frame to carry it
overweight
weight
and consumption
of nutritious food
with physical exercise
is the key to fight against this
cause.Submitted by Nikita & Kash on
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