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In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

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Those days have gone when purchasing household and personal material considered as a daily life routine.Now it has become a status symbol and one hobby, but as far as my personal view concern I found it's not a positive
on
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for
 the individual.In the following essay I would explicit the negative side of
this
 phenomena.
To begin
 with
,
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there's nothing bad or good in a shopping, till it has done for necessity, but when it's turned into overuse of resources without any doubt it puts an adverse effect on personnel's life.
For
example if
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example, if
 person doing shopping without any need only for as a purpose of
hobbies it's
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hobbies, it's
waste
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a waste
 of
fund
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funding
 and time and
this
 money can be used for other purpose.
Moreover it's
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Moreover, it's
 generally seen that the majority of youngsters follow successful person and try to wear same as he or she and give more preference to foreign brand compared with domestic one.Through in
this
 way large
some
a quantity of money
sum
 of money went out of
country
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the country
 which effect
overall growth
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the overall growth
 of national.
For instance
,
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,
many
comapaines
an institution created to conduct business
companies
 like Gucci.Nike
,
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apple earned huge amount of money and many national companies like Videocon still struggling to find
there
of them or themselves
their
 base. To conclude
,
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,
although
 shopping is
good
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the best
 activity for kick of free
time but
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time, but
 it's only useful till we are under our strength when it changed into as sense of pride or hobby than its dangerous.
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