The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000, there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

This
is undeniable that personal and other transport vehicles quantity is growing very rapidly.
This
can create a harmful situation for the climate and for the citizens.
This
problem can be mitigated with appropriate steps from the law with the help of us. I believe that the authority should invest more in technology to produce renewable-based fuel vehicles.
Also
, the ministry should implement some rules to regulate owning and usage of personal vehicles.
Firstly
,
this
is a fact that the number of vehicles on a daily basis is increasing, and it produces mega-tons carbon which deposits in the environment.
For example
, in Delhi, every day around 5tons carbon fumes releases in the air and major parts of the fossil fuel-driven vehicles.
As a result
,
this
can cause heart and lung disease in humans who live in
this
kind of habitat. To avoid these, the authority should produce vehicles which
fueled
record in a public office or in a court of law
filed
failed
filled
with renewable sources.
This
solution can reduce the issues related to human health and stain on the surroundings.
Additionally
, the government should introduce an electrically driven automobile and mainly public transport not only that, but
also
the government should start a campaign about awareness of the benefits of public transport which can help to the economy of the nation.
Secondly
, nowadays,
this
has become a status symbol to own a car even it is not an essential requirement for them.
This
can be an issue for the ministry as traffic congestion or pollution expects. To illustrate, in earlier days, a few thousands of cars and other wagon were running on Ney-York Citi, but nowadays, we can see millions of vehicles running back and forth.
This
cased because of one’s want to maintain their status and
also
easy transportation through own car. As per my personal opinion, it can be limited by the authority by forming the rules for owning a vehicle.
For instance
, citizens can be restricted to own
a
Suggestion
an
automobile based on their income and their purpose.
Moreover
, those are owning a vehicle, they can be regulated by law in force with appropriate rules like adding high fine on breach of these laws. In conclusion, it is true that we have become more dependent on own transportation, and to tackle with
this
not only situation we should start to use non-fossil fuel operated vehicles, but
also
the government should take proper action to build law to control owning and use of vehicles.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliance on
  • regulate
  • traffic congestion
  • pollution
  • public health
  • sustainable development
  • alternative forms of transport
  • car ownership
  • balancing benefits and drawbacks
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