Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?

Majority
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The majority
of people prefer price as most necessary thing while buying
product
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product, for
for example
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:
as
new phone
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a new phone
or when taking medical treatment.I completely disagree with
this
opinion and think
quality
is much more important than everything.
First
of all
,
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,
I that type of person who is
favor
promote over another
favour
flavour
of everything being evaluated by
quality
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the quality
.Everyone knows
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now
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improving, utilizing
from advertising in
business world
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the business world
,
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,
in order that increasing sharply
rivarly
the act of competing as for profit or a prize
rivalry
.Whereas
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,
some people can not choose reliable
product
and opting for a cheap deal or compromise on costly.In
consequence
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consequence, this
this
situation
bring
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brings
to shell out overmuch money or taking poor
quality
product
.
For instance
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Samson
and
Iphone
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iPhone
IPhone
Phone
companies more pricey than
Mi but
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me, but
me but
they will buy
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me
because it is perfect in favour of their budget.
As a
result their
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result, their
new phone not durable
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even if it was discounted mobile phones.
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,
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
group of people
think
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thinks
if
service
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the service
or
product
will be so costly that service the best
one
.As you see topic again about
that
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that, however
however
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,
in everywhere you can find cheaper and
unadmitted
morover
in addition
moreover
good services and products.
Such
as
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In pharmacy
have
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has
two
type
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types
of headache pills A and B.A
one
more expensive than B so that
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,
buyer
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the buyer
saw A on TV while advertising in B
one
has the same content, though
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,
buyer
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the buyer
was bought
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at
one
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nutshell
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a nutshell
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refers to the speaker or writer
I
pen
down saying
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down, saying
that
quality
is necessary in all of thing
furthermore
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,
I strongly believe
thst
pointing out something
that
choose
product
depending on the price not correctly way!
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget
  • prioritize
  • manage finances
  • high quality
  • affordable
  • effective
  • durable
  • essential services
  • efficacy
  • compromise one's health
  • long-term savings
  • durability
  • efficiency
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