You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: Say what the participants liked about the hotel Explain why they were unhappy about the food Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

Dear Sir, I am writing to share some feedback I received from our employees about the experience they had at your
hotel
last
Saturday. Our company held an all-day meeting at your
hotel
that day and I was the organiser responsible for the meeting.
Firstly
, I want to thank you for all the preparations you made for our meeting. It would have taken you a lot of time to decorate the hall. Almost everyone attended told me that the balloons and the flowers made the main hall of the
hotel
cozy
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and comfortable.
Besides
, the sound quality of the voice system in the hall was amazing. Everyone, even those who sat in the corner, could hear the presentation clearly.
However
, most employees were not satisfied with your food. They complained that some food items were not fresh enough.
Also
, most items were not particularly delicious. I am sure you will want to improve it because bad food can hurt the reputation of your
hotel
. I would like to suggest that you hire better chefs and ensure strict quality control. I hope you will take my suggestions favourably. Thank you for your kind attention. Yours sincerely
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Compliments
  • Ambiance
  • Professionalism
  • Hospitality
  • Quality
  • Variety
  • Freshness
  • Catering
  • Menu options
  • Dietary requirements
  • Feedback
  • Survey
  • Collaboration
  • Improvements
  • Rectify
  • Gastronomy
  • Culinary
  • Hospitality industry
  • Client satisfaction
  • Constructive criticism
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